The Losing Grip
It’s hard to hold my ground
When I’m standing up to fear
It’s hard to keep from screaming
When I feel a pain so sheer
It’s hard to see the truth
When I’m looking through my tears
It’s hard to keep on holding
When I know the end is near
I never thought it would be like this
I always thought that I would fight
Didn’t think I’d lose my grip
And now I lie here dying
I don’t want to feel this way
I got nothing left to say
Because I’m lying here broken
Wounds which healed once again open
This is the path I’ve chosen
I feel the end drawing closer
I’m lying here broken
Because I’m just a loser
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good one there dude.and I don’t believe that you’ve lost yet. SO YOU CANNOT CALL YOURSELF A LOSER. =D
July 18, 2008 at 3:34 am
“It’s hard to see the truthWhen I’m looking through my tearsIt’s hard to keep on holdingWhen I know the end is near”good stuff dudehave you read any of my poetry?it’s on the blog…and also on my deviantartpoetry and mostly lyricsyou could’ve ended it better though :Ploser 😛
July 18, 2008 at 9:44 am
thanks guys.. i was feeling like a loser when I wrote this so it ended that way
July 19, 2008 at 1:52 am
Words put so well together, stands so strong right by each other expressing the inner feelings of a person you have done so well. I am moved or touched, would be an understatement. Knowing someone goes through such emotions is rather painful if one has already walked down the same path. I am truly amazed by the way you’ve put together such a wonderful masterpiece. I just couldnt resist not leaving a comment! To many more ahead…the unsilent dawn… awaken – ally – amaze ( think hard.. ull know what i mean )
July 30, 2008 at 8:30 pm
my comment was for ur entire blog!
July 30, 2008 at 8:43 pm