Sometimes I
Sometimes I feel like a stranger, because I can’t recognize myself. Sometimes I want to let go, although deep inside I know I have to hold on. Sometimes I wish I could read your thoughts, so that I know what you think of me. Sometimes I wish you would see me for who I really am, so I could come out of the shadows. Sometimes, I wish that words were weapons because they are all I have. Sometimes I wish I had a reason, so I could understand why. Sometimes I wrap myself in fear, afraid of something I can’t see. Sometimes I wish I had never given up, so I wouldn’t have to envy people who didn’t. Sometimes I lie, because I’m afraid of the truth. Sometimes I smile, just to show that I’m not dead inside. Sometimes I get lost, trying to find myself. Sometimes I hope tomorrow will be better than today, like today was better than yesterday.
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“Sometimes I hope tomorrow will be better than today, like today was better than yesterday.”How I wish that works and is true…:)Lovely words…. lovely post… and made me connect with it too..:)
November 7, 2008 at 4:20 am
awesome stuff… I can so relate to it…
November 7, 2008 at 10:50 am
‘like today was better than yesterday’optimistic ending.Nice stuff once again! i like this reflectuve streak ur in 😀 ciao
November 7, 2008 at 11:39 am
its the optimism that keeps us going although it can be vague at times
November 8, 2008 at 6:23 am
Wow… this just left me awed..It got me thinking we really do all those things, subconsciously.. What hit me the most was this;”Sometimes I feel like a stranger, because I can’t recognize myself. Sometimes I want to let go, although deep inside I know I have to hold on.”
November 9, 2008 at 8:40 am
wow mate “Sometimes I lie, because I’m afraid of the truth. Sometimes I smile, just to show that I’m not dead inside. Sometimes I get lost, trying to find myself” this is the first poem i’ve ever read tht i really like.. and im a person who hates poetry… nice work
November 9, 2008 at 7:48 pm