A new divide I created within, to make sense of the infinite futility that lies inside…

Distort Me

Breathe me
Until all I am is breathless
Break me
Until all I am is fractured

Ruin me
Until all I am is worthless
Burn me
Until all I am is ashes

Doubt me
Until all I am is faithless
Reverse me
Until all I am is inverted

Consume me
Until all I am is faceless
Distort me
Until all I am is static

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20 responses

  1. Delilah

    i likes. missed your stuff.

    November 11, 2009 at 10:09 pm

  2. Whacko

    krrrzzzzttt… nice one! esp the ending..

    November 11, 2009 at 10:13 pm

  3. And you’re back =D and with a bang πŸ˜€ Love it… always a pleasure reading you πŸ™‚

    November 11, 2009 at 10:29 pm

  4. Chavie

    good stuff man! πŸ˜€

    November 11, 2009 at 10:48 pm

  5. @Delilah – Thank u πŸ™‚

    @Whacko – Krrzzzzt….. Thanks dude

    @Black Rose – Yeah I’m back, thank you as always

    @Chavie – Thanks yo! πŸ™‚

    November 11, 2009 at 10:55 pm

  6. sabbyaz

    Finally πŸ˜€
    Loved this, loved the ending more πŸ™‚

    November 12, 2009 at 12:16 am

  7. GOOOOOOOOD!!

    November 12, 2009 at 7:19 am

  8. @Sabby & Dili – Thanks guys πŸ™‚

    November 12, 2009 at 9:07 am

  9. how about:
    Distort me
    Until all I am is senseless
    ?

    November 12, 2009 at 10:33 am

  10. and
    Break me
    Until all I am is pieces

    just to keep the rhyming going on
    (:

    November 12, 2009 at 10:34 am

  11. ‘Break me, until all I am is pieces’ is good. Should have gone with that.

    Distort-senseless is also good, but the first line that came to me was ‘Distort me, until all i am is static’. After that everything else fell into place, so I didn’t want to change that πŸ™‚

    November 12, 2009 at 12:50 pm

  12. brandix

    and then i’m tagging you also to write a letter to your past self πŸ™‚

    November 13, 2009 at 9:04 am

  13. Naice.

    November 16, 2009 at 9:05 am

  14. This is beautiful.

    November 16, 2009 at 6:59 pm

  15. @brandix – Thanks for the tag. Will get to it soon πŸ™‚

    @Gadget Girl & Scrump – Thank you very much πŸ™‚

    November 16, 2009 at 9:32 pm

  16. Dee

    wow… niiice…

    November 17, 2009 at 4:17 pm

  17. Glad to have you today,
    I will get into details soon.
    Busy with some other agenda now.
    cheers.

    November 2, 2010 at 7:05 pm

  18. Wow, this is intense! I don’t know if this is love poetry, but to me it speaks of all-consuming love. Lovely!

    November 3, 2010 at 11:46 am

    • C.

      thanks so much for the comment! πŸ™‚

      November 7, 2010 at 5:20 pm

  19. fantastic piece.
    Thanks for sharing!

    Please help giving (belated) birthday wishes to 3 or 4 fellow poets:

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/happy-birthday-eric-dom/

    Thanks a lot for the support.
    Happy November!
    Your presence adds light to our space, keep shining!
    xxx

    November 3, 2010 at 1:36 pm

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