A new divide I created within, to make sense of the infinite futility that lies inside…

Lifeless

Lifeless is
what I want you to be
Shut out from everything
that can set you free
I don’t need your emotion
Nor do I need your touch
I just want you still
surrendered to me
For all I can feel
is all that is empty
and all I can see
is what the blind see
So I’ll pull you in
I’ll pick you apart
Until you are as lifeless
as lifeless as me

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8 responses

  1. Whacko

    tops!

    January 31, 2010 at 10:57 pm

  2. “For all I can feel
    is all that is empty
    and all I can see
    is what the blind see”

    Wow. No really, wow!

    February 1, 2010 at 12:01 am

  3. Chavie

    Like! 🙂

    February 1, 2010 at 3:43 am

  4. This struck a chord with me- Good one!

    February 1, 2010 at 9:50 am

  5. “So I’ll pull you in
    I’ll pick you apart
    Until you are as lifeless
    as lifeless as me”

    Brilliant. But that’s nothing new when it comes to your poems 🙂

    February 1, 2010 at 12:13 pm

  6. C.

    @Whack/Black Rose/Chavie – Thanks

    @Sashi – Thank you for the comment and for visiting 🙂

    @Sabby – Why, thank you.. 😀

    February 1, 2010 at 6:30 pm

  7. “I’ll pick you apart
    Until you are as lifeless
    as lifeless as me”

    \m/ \m/

    February 3, 2010 at 10:42 am

  8. \M/ 😮 😀

    February 3, 2010 at 10:53 am

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