The Chase
Fighting gravity, lose the white veil
Letting go of soul, let it fly
Into the reverie that I was promised
I’m lost again, a victim of my crime
Hide the pretentious scars
Heal myself on the surface
I need the deeper wounds to survive
I am only human, to myself I must remind
I will become what I’m chasing
A victim of my own crime
I feel separation when body meets floor
Surrendered from above
I can only see what I don’t feel
I can only feel what I don’t see
Weary yet blissful, a victim of my crime
I can’t save me, but I want you to try
I’ve touched the sky and kissed rock bottom
Looking for perfection in between
I want to feel your warmth for one last time
Save me, help me make up my own mind
I am what I am chasing
The victim of my crime
Much like Tool’s lyrics, your poems have so many interpretations too.
Very dark, very deep…loved the last bit.
Nicely done, as always 🙂
February 18, 2010 at 1:41 am
hmm this could be a song! nice
February 18, 2010 at 9:13 am
Mmm. Tool.
February 18, 2010 at 9:20 am
har har love the way u end in every poem. naice \m/
February 18, 2010 at 9:46 am
Nice.
February 18, 2010 at 5:12 pm
lovely, very lyrical! 🙂
February 18, 2010 at 8:35 pm
You should compile your poems and have them published. I’ve read some of your previous poems as well, you’ve certainly got a talent for writing poetry.
February 20, 2010 at 1:35 am
stunning words,
a poem in depth.
well done!
October 5, 2010 at 4:47 pm
I agree, worthy of a beautiful song…thanks for linking with Potluck xx
October 6, 2010 at 7:19 am
thank u 🙂
October 9, 2010 at 10:46 am
Be curious what inspired the poem. Interesting take. Glad you posted it.
crb.
October 11, 2010 at 1:01 pm
Thank you! 🙂
They were just some thoughts in my head..
October 18, 2010 at 8:19 am