A new divide I created within, to make sense of the infinite futility that lies inside…

The Last Dance

I turn my camera on by Slightly Amazing Grace

I see you dance in the light where the world is yours
In false pretense, I sit in the dark watching my cure
Listening to your heart sing in a cadenced melody
Watching your eyes, interpreting their story
As you pick up your steps, you brighten your play
Glowing brighter than the light in your way
Illuminated in brightness, white light blindness
The words best said are the ones unspoken
The path best walked is the one not chosen
I wake up to a room of numbness and fear
And the sound of your silence
Reminds me the end is near

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12 responses

  1. Sounds familiar 😛
    One of my favourites. Loved each and every sentence and rhyme 🙂

    March 8, 2010 at 7:45 pm

  2. *hugs*

    March 8, 2010 at 9:30 pm

  3. I really liked this. Brilliantly done.

    March 9, 2010 at 12:04 am

  4. Chavie

    Loved this one mate… nicely written! 😀

    March 9, 2010 at 7:19 am

  5. C.

    @Sabby – Yes yes, u convinced me to post this. 🙂

    @Michele – Thank you for visiting.

    @BlackRose & Chavie – Thanks doods!!

    March 9, 2010 at 11:59 am

  6. One of the best i’ve read! Such simplicity and such depth, a fantastic combination! Loved it, specially,

    The words best said are the ones unspoken
    The path best walked is the one not chosen

    March 11, 2010 at 11:49 pm

  7. aufidius

    good!

    April 13, 2010 at 5:48 pm

  8. Lovely!

    May 12, 2010 at 12:06 pm

  9. Jay

    Stumbled on this by chance and a wonderful chance indeed! Lovely n obscure,just the way I like it 🙂

    July 4, 2010 at 11:24 pm

    • C.

      Thanks a lot. Glad you like it. Hope you visit again 🙂

      July 7, 2010 at 2:00 pm

  10. The words best said are the ones unspoken.. How so very true..
    Very nicely twisted tale with throes of passion..
    🙂

    September 9, 2010 at 5:48 am

    • C.

      Thank u 🙂

      September 10, 2010 at 4:58 am

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