A new divide I created within, to make sense of the infinite futility that lies inside…

Horizons Apart

Slip in sideways and meet me
At the corner where our dreams collide
Don’t hold yourself back
Because here is now and now is here
The only place we are free
Here is the only place we can be
Follow your heart, your desire
Whatever it is that makes you tick
Because the clock is ticking
Closer for the end to begin
When the horizon sets us apart

So don’t hold back
Don’t let me suffer my desire
Let’s set this place on fire
Love and lust used to be a fine line
Not here, the world is yours and mine
Come closer, show your true face
Let us not suffer this desire
Cross the line you can never cross
Cross the line before we run out of time
Before we have to open our eyes
Once again…


20 responses

  1. Sabby

    One of your best yet.
    I love πŸ™‚

    August 29, 2010 at 6:10 am

  2. fabulous!

    August 29, 2010 at 7:23 am

  3. I really like this!! Your line ‘Love and lust used to be a fine line’ is amazing

    August 29, 2010 at 5:19 pm

  4. C.

    Thank you!!

    August 29, 2010 at 6:16 pm

  5. welcome in,

    u make my day lighter and funnier..
    have fun visiting!

    August 29, 2010 at 6:25 pm

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  7. Great piece, thank you for sharing

    August 29, 2010 at 8:15 pm

  8. Nice poem, It’s very grave. I like how you capture that feeling.

    August 29, 2010 at 10:09 pm

  9. Love, love, love this! πŸ™‚ I also want to thank you for the lovely comment you left on my blog, much appreciated!

    August 29, 2010 at 11:35 pm

  10. Very lovely poem. My favorite lines are
    “Love and lust used to be a fine line
    Not here, the world is yours and mine”

    Two thumbs up!

    August 30, 2010 at 12:55 am

  11. Dakshima

    see me on http://loveamongotherthings.wordpress.com/

    August 30, 2010 at 4:09 pm

  12. Very insightful poem. I love the use of words. Have a wonderful day πŸ™‚

    September 1, 2010 at 9:57 am

  13. Thanks for joining Poets United. We hope you enjoy being a part of our community. Just an FYI we have a Sunday posting where you can post any poem you want. This would be a good one to put there for others to see.

    “So don’t hold back
    Don’t let me suffer my desire”

    Is a a very striking line. I enjoyed the poem. thank you for sharing.

    September 1, 2010 at 9:49 pm

  14. Really enjoyed that. You get the emotion across very clearly!

    September 3, 2010 at 1:10 pm

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  16. very will written capture of desire.

    September 6, 2010 at 3:27 pm

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    u got to check out details yourself…

    do find time visiting poets back, thanks!

    September 26, 2010 at 6:04 pm

    • C.

      thank u and will do..

      September 30, 2010 at 6:42 pm

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